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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The bar charts show the percentage of computer possession over the span of eight years from 2002 to 2010 and the classification between the number of owners and their educational level. Overall, it can be realized that the main trend in both chart is upward. The computer ownerships slightly increased during this period and in whole years educated people made up the greater share of computer owners.
As can be observed that, 10 2002, near to 60 percent of population had computer and this figure rose to 70 percent in 2010. There seems to be a positive relationship between owners of computer and their level of education. People with non-high school diploma constituted only 15 percent of owners while bachelor degree and postgraduate qualifiers own 70 percent and 75 percent of computer ownership, respectively. In 2010, the same trend is seen but the number of owners in all of educational level increased compared to 2002. About 40 percent of computer possession in 2010 were in non-high school diploma level but it reached to 90 percent among postgraduate owners.