Task1

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vani manikkam
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Task1

Post by vani manikkam »

Hello,
I would be grateful if someone could evaluate my writing:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
You should write at least 150 words.

Ans:
Dear Sir,

Following my enrollment in the computer literacy qualification, I am writing to request for some time off at work in order to complete the course. This is so due to exams that are scheduled this week.

However, I will be compensating for these time off the following week in order to catch up with the pending works. I will be available to work two additional hours daily to complete the remaining tasks.

Please note that this qualification is of high importance to me to grow in my career because it will increase my potential in the technology field as well as using the software in a better way to optimize my working performance. This will hence give a rise in my level of confidence, thereby, being a good aspect for the company prospect.

I will be very grateful if you could consider this request.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours faithfully,

Vani Manikkam
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