21 September essay topic in India

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All students should attend school untill eighteen .

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?


The graph was on past and prospective GDP of a country in percentages spent for three resources like health , education and transport . Between 2000 and 2025.
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Thank you for sharing this information, Tina. How do you feel about your performance?
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It's my pleasure, Ryan . I am not satisfied with my performance for writing . It was difficult for me to accumulate ideas , vocabulary and finally to give structure to my essay within specified time. I realised, after watching your videos that I need to learn and practice a lot in order to improve my English .

But, I must say that I am fortunate enough to find you and your website. You are an amazing teacher, that I have ever met. You talent is remarkable. It is so nice to listen to u. I literally, fall in love with your voice and technique of teaching. You are doing a great job. I wish, I could meet u during my childhood for learning english because its extremely difficult to rectify our mistakes at this stage of our life. Hope, I will remain in touch with u in future.

I am not going to attempt IELTS again in future. Firstly, I am exhausted. Secondly, by Gods grace, I got my result with desired score of 7 in each, yesterday by post. Isn't it very surprising ? I applied for enquiry on result in august for my previous attempt and the band score of speaking upgraded from 6 to 7.5. I was very confident that I can't score so low in speaking , hence I applied for EOR . At last, 7 in each .

I am looking forward for my future plans . My sincere regards to you . May God bless you and your family with everything that you wish for.
I am also thankful to the forum community as well for taking part in active discussion and helping me in correcting my errors.
This is a message from my heart , Please ignore my language errors .

Sincere Regards,
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Tina. I also feel very fortunate to be able to connect with people all around the world via these websites.

Your speaking mark is quite extraordinary. A 1.5 band jump after reevaluation? The original examiner must have been asleep at the wheel. ;)

I wish you all the best in your future endeavors. I am very happy to hear your IELTS challenges are over. Your perseverance and dedication really did pay off, didn't they!
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Thanks Ryan, for your best wishes.
This is a classical example that how a person as an examiner can dent your carrier. I cannot express the mental harassment , I underwent . On the other hand , people like you , who are doing selfless service to students .
There should be some audit system to check the aptitude of IELTS test takers too . It was very painful experience for me . I suffered for no fault of mine. Amidst all this , I found the best teacher of the world and its you, Ryan. You came as blessing in disguise for me . My heartfelt best wishes to you once again.
I am surely going to take lessons of English from you in future. I need to learn a lot . I am extremely thankful to you that you personally checked one of my essay . I know , how busy u r . Apart from English, I learnt dedication and devotion to ones own work from you . I will carry this treasure through out my life and would like to apply for my profession . Your passion for teaching is very obvious . Keep doing your good work . The world needs people like you .

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Tina wrote:Thanks Ryan, for your best wishes.
This is a classical example that how a person as an examiner can dent your carrier. I cannot express the mental harassment , I underwent . On the other hand , people like you , who are doing selfless service to students .
There should be some audit system to check the aptitude of IELTS test takers too . It was very painful experience for me . I suffered for no fault of mine. Amidst all this , I found the best teacher of the world and its you, Ryan. You came as blessing in disguise for me . My heartfelt best wishes to you once again.
I am surely going to take lessons of English from you in future. I need to learn a lot . I am extremely thankful to you that you personally checked one of my essay . I know , how busy u r . Apart from English, I learnt dedication and devotion to ones own work from you . I will carry this treasure through out my life and would like to apply for my profession . Your passion for teaching is very obvious . Keep doing your good work . The world needs people like you .

Regards
Tina .
I don't doubt it was extremely difficult at times. It must make you value your final success all that much more.

Thank you again for your kind words. Good luck!
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Tina wrote:All students should attend school untill eighteen .

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?


The graph was on past and prospective GDP of a country in percentages spent for three resources like health , education and transport . Between 2000 and 2025.

Hi Tina,

Congratulations on ur achievement, but it would have been nice to have a pen friend like u :D . I would like u to comment on my essays in future if u r free.

Cheers,
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Sure Ali. I will try my best . I must admit that writing is my weakness. But still we can learn a lot together by correcting each other tasks.
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Hi Tina,

Congrats Tina... All the best for your future endeavours. :)

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