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JOTHI
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Tomorrow I have my Exam, Please give me suggestions to improve

Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Advertisements play an imperative role in profit of popular consumer goods and a product gets famous based on the real needs of the society. For instance lifestyle and cuisine differ from state to state, so people adopt to buy things what they need. Also some people tend to have goods which are gorgeous in television screen. This essay narrates both of these views in detail.

Some advertisement results different outcome from different society,because people agree only what they really suppose to have. For instance in India, North Indians consume more fast foods, they are adopted to have Mc. donalized culture more than south Indians. Although the advertisement is broadcast in same way, it does not reach popularity in south India. More over people look for quality and importance of particular products towards their lifestyle and need in society. Thus it is tangible that people procure things based on their real needs.

In contrast to that, although some products are not essential to obtain, yet some people deserve it by dint of reflective power of fascinated advertisement and the famous actor's role in it. Cosmetics and branded fabrics are the best quintessence for this. The elves power of advertisement ramifies itself the real need and quality of products. Especially adolescents are attracted towards this and impulsively they purchase goods for their trials. Moreover most of the popular companies are getting benefits through children and youngsters products.

Overall, then the viewpoints develop here states that, matured people are not influenced by the ramify trick of advertisement, but they seek the needs in all kind first. whereas youngsters are attracted towards gorgeous of advertisement and they forget the real needs of society and themselves, before procuring goods for trials. So the high sales of popular consumer products based on the real needs of society not by the reflective power of advertisement.
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