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[robin20y]

Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits outweigh the problem?
International communication is a difficult task in this linguistically divided world. Therefore, some people brought an idea of a new common language for international usage. However this seems to be rather negative in nature. This view will be stated in the fourth coming paragraphs.
First of all, a new language would take extended time to develop. For instance, language experts need more time to compile certain parts of a new language such as grammar. So, international communication is not expected to improve until the full operation of a language is commenced. This makes it clear that why the concept of a new common language is not beneficial.
Secondly, even if the language is developed, it would not spread as expected. For example, insufficient number of resources and linguistic experts delay the expansion of new language to the world. Thus, it is evident that new language will fail to represent the international communication in near future.
Finally, the availability of many popular languages does not necessitate a new lingua franca. To illustrate, English is more popular and widely accepted all over the world. Therefore, encouraging the use of such popular languages is helpful to tackle the difficulties in the creation and distribution of a new language.
To encapsulate, the extended time to create and to spread a new language is less beneficial to the world. So, now it is clear that why I have mentioned the idea of a new common language as a negative approach. After analyzing the subject, it is clear that instead of creating a new language, nations should promote a popular language for international communication.

[arion]

one another topic,
as part of a class assignment you have write about the following topic:
millions of people every year move to england-speaking countries such as australia, britain or america, in order to study at school, college or university.
why do so many people want to study in english?
why is english such an important international language?
give some reasons for your answer.

[robin20y]

quality of education in the English speaking countries could be a reason
secondly
English is hugely popular and widely accepted all over the world.