pls grade it(advantage and disadvantages of mobile phones)

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manoj
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pls grade it(advantage and disadvantages of mobile phones)

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Mobile phone is one of the most significant invention in our modern world. Although they become a necessity to our life. Mobile phone brings about adverse effect as well. In this article ,the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones will be explored.
Many people hold the opinion of using mobile phones. that makes them to communicate each other through out the world at any time. whenever if someone wants to contact another, he can make it by a text or call instantly. There are large no of mobile applications are there in internet mobile phones other than communication. In addition for business people communication is necessity to enhance their business and to develop their business all over the world.
Nevertheless, many people do not accept using mobile phones. For instance most of the parents will not allow their children he or she to use mobile phone, when they were studying and while they were in driving. However, most of the people met an accident by using mobile phones while they were in driving.
In addition, lack of privacy make people in stress and tension. If their mind is filled with stress ,they are not supposed to lead a happy life. Eventually the radiation which emits from the mobile phones leads to affect the brain it has been scientifically proved and hazardous to the nature.
In conclusion, mobile phones have benefits like convenience and efficiency in our modern life. But to avoid the adverse impact we have to use it properly.
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manoj wrote:The mobile phone is one of the most significant inventions in our modern world. They have become a necessity in our lives.However, mobile phones have an adverse effect as well. In this article, the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones will be explored.

Many people own a mobile phone today. This makes it easy to communicate throughout the world at any time. Whenever someone wants to contact another, he can text or call instantly. There are a large number of mobile applications, as well, which makes mobile phones useful for tasks other than communication. For most business people, communication is necessary to enhance and develop their business all over the world, so a mobile phone is a necessary requirement.

Nevertheless, some people do not accept using mobile phones. For instance, most of the parents will not allow their children to use a mobile phone when they are studying and while they are driving, because using a mobile phone while driving is a common cause of accidents.

In addition, lack of privacy can cause stress and tension in some people. If their mind is filled with stress, they are not able to lead a happy life. Another negative impact is the radiation which is emitted by mobile phones and can lead to brain tumours. It has been scientifically proved that this is hazardous people.

In conclusion, mobile phones have benefits like convenience and efficiency in our modern life. But to avoid the adverse impact we have to use them properly.
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