Writing task 1:graph regarding the missing out on primary as

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soujanya
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Writing task 1:graph regarding the missing out on primary as

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:DPlease grade me in writing in task 1 thanks in advance :)[/u]
The graph illustrates about the risk of missing out on primary and secondary children living in the poorest countries from the year 2000 to 2004 .
On the one hand we can estimate the girls of primary schools and the other hand gives the information regarding the boys or primary schools same can be estimated with the secondary schools also. The girls from the secondary school of industrialised countries reached to 92 and the most highest missing can be seen in boys with 95 in primary schools but from the same countries when compared with the girls.
Then there is less missing in the developing countries in the secondary schools eventually increased to 49 and in boys to 50.ob the other side that is in primary schools of the same countries the missing is increased to 83 in girls and 88 in boys.
So the most missing cases of children is seen in the industrialised counties then in the underdeveloped countries from the both primary and secondary schools.
saqibali
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Re: Writing task 1:graph regarding the missing out on primar

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I supposed, its an older post.
Do you still need to correct this essay?
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