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[masudsust07]

The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the various stages involve in recycling natural water collected from rain.

First of all, the falling rainwater from sky is stored in a large dam. After that, it is supplied into a water treatment plant, where rainwater is purified in order to make it suitable for human consumption. Following that, drinking water is send to public homes where it is used for various household purposes. From this, used water in houses is piped into a waste water treatment plant. After treatment, recycled water is send back to home user and excess treated water generated from this plant is drained into a river.

Apart from this, rainwater is also collected directly in a water tank attach to a house. This water is mainly utilized for cleaning purposes and for watering the garden. Finally, after treatment storm-water is send via drain to river.

Overall, the rainwater is a reliable source of renewable water and it is greatly saving the environment by reducing pressure on ground water.
Word count: 167

[saqibali]

The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the various stages involve[d] in recycling natural water collected from rain.

First of all, the falling rainwater from sky is stored in a large dam. After that, it is supplied into a water treatment plant, where rainwater is purified in order to make it suitable for human consumption[revise sentence]. Following that[this], drinking water is send[t] to public homes where it is used for various household purposes. From this, used water in houses is piped into a waste water treatment plant. After treatment, recycled water is send back to home user and excess treated water generated from this plant is drained into a river.

Apart from this, rainwater is also collected directly in a water tank attach to a house. This water is mainly utilized for cleaning purposes and for watering the garden. Finally, after treatment storm-water is send via drain to river.

Overall, the rainwater is a reliable source of renewable water and it is greatly saving the environment by reducing pressure on ground water.
Word count: 167