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Topic : Some people believe thay studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after highshool.
Discuss both views and give your opinion



Many people believe that attending higher education is the best way to be successful in the future. However, there are argued that starting a career right after highshool is much more efficient. Both views will be discuss in this essay.

There are plenty of reason why university is the best choice to success in future. First, in further education , people will be taught a lot of intensive academic knowledge to prepare for the job,also, it will improve everyone' logical, grow their maturity and confidence. If people have specific knowledge ,they will be easier to find jobs with good qualification and high salary. Futhermore, they might be sough right after graduate by many employers which enable them to live more fulfilling lives.

However, there are some advantages when people start to work straight after highshool. The independence in financial is the most attractive factor. For example , people will have ability to save money for future study which reduce their parents' financial considerable. Moreover, they can accumulate a great number of experience. Working is a chance for many people to develop their social and marketable skills which is very important for promotion in jobs.

From my perspective, I agree with the first idea which is study in higher education is the best way to success. I think that tertiary education provide us numerous of opputinities to find out yourself and learn new skills such as teamwork, presentation and so on which might help them well at working. In summarize, I strongly believe that if people have university degree their future will much more wider and brighter .

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