Some People believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Every country is recognize on the basis of cultures, rituals and the behavior that the residents of that country show. One country’s culture may not seem attractive for other country’s inhabitants. Although some respect their culture.
People respect their elders and the elder person taught us to never disrespect to another culture and the person as well because the only thing that help us to stand is our nature, our history, and our custom, if these are not with us nobody is going to recognize us. If we are going to another human being’s residence we should respect his culture the same way as we respect ours. It creates a very powerful yet very gentle image in their mind about us and our country. However a visitor should also participate in local rituals with an immense joy to know more about the culture of that physical area.
But few thinks that a country should also respect culture difference by accepting the newly arrived culture. There are lots of benefits associated with it such as local residents will get to know a totally different culture that they have never interacted with moreover it’s also indirectly help the local country to create a friendly relation with that particular country. Because friendship is the greatest bond in this whole world and this spectacular welcome of cultural differences will brought both country’s people into broad head start of a picturesque relationship among all residents.
As a result I can say that neither only visitor should follow local culture and behavior but a host country should also welcome the cultural differences.
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Every country is recognize recognized on the basis of cultures, rituals and the behavior that the residents of that country show follow. One country’s culture may not seem attractive for other country’s inhabitants. Although some respect their culture.
[Write one line what the essay is about]
People respect their elders and the elder person taught us to never disrespect to[no need of TO] another culture and the person as well because the only thing that help us to stand is our nature[culture], our history, and our custom, if these are not with us nobody is going to recognize us. If we are going to another human being’s residence we should respect his culture the same way as we respect ours. It creates a very powerful yet very gentle image in their mind about us and our country. However a visitor should also participate in local rituals with an immense joy to know more about the culture of that physical area.
But few thinks that a country should also respect culture difference by accepting the newly arrived culture. There are lots of benefits associated with it such as local residents will get to know a totally different culture that they have never interacted with moreover it’s also indirectly help the local country to create a friendly relation with that particular country. Because friendship is the greatest bond in this whole world and this spectacular welcome[tolerence] of cultural differences will brought both country’s people into broad head start of a picturesque relationship among all residents.
As a result I can say that neither only visitor should follow local culture and behavior but a host country should also welcome the cultural differences.
i think you are using too big sentences.
Every country is recognize recognized on the basis of cultures, rituals and the behavior that the residents of that country show follow. One country’s culture may not seem attractive for other country’s inhabitants. Although some respect their culture.
[Write one line what the essay is about]
People respect their elders and the elder person taught us to never disrespect to[no need of TO] another culture and the person as well because the only thing that help us to stand is our nature[culture], our history, and our custom, if these are not with us nobody is going to recognize us. If we are going to another human being’s residence we should respect his culture the same way as we respect ours. It creates a very powerful yet very gentle image in their mind about us and our country. However a visitor should also participate in local rituals with an immense joy to know more about the culture of that physical area.
But few thinks that a country should also respect culture difference by accepting the newly arrived culture. There are lots of benefits associated with it such as local residents will get to know a totally different culture that they have never interacted with moreover it’s also indirectly help the local country to create a friendly relation with that particular country. Because friendship is the greatest bond in this whole world and this spectacular welcome[tolerence] of cultural differences will brought both country’s people into broad head start of a picturesque relationship among all residents.
As a result I can say that neither only visitor should follow local culture and behavior but a host country should also welcome the cultural differences.
i think you are using too big sentences.