pls grade it - write a letter to manager regarding conferenc

[rairaichan0323]

Write a letter to your manager regarding the recent conference you attended
• how the conference benefited you
• what you are going to present to your colleague
• why you thing it will benefit them



Dear Mr. Lee,

I am writing to you regard to the conference which I had attended recently.

This conference had introduced the-state-of-art software programs which is used for anti-virus in order to help companies to keep away from the hackers. I have learnt enormous useful skills as well as significant information from it.

After summarizing this precious information, I will arrange a meeting for introducing it to all the company members. During the meeting, I will teach and demonstrate them some techniques for how to lessen their chances to be attacked by the hackers. Furthermore, I will hold private lessons for each department for educating them personally. Consequently, if they could learn those skills and apply it properly on their daily works then they are able to operate their jobs smoothly. Also, all the information about company will be highly protected.

If you have any comments of my arrangement, I would most appreciate of any suggestions you could give in this regard.

Yours sincerely,

Janis Lee