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[DJvj]

Topic:-
Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.

Discuss both views and give your opinion
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Learning is an important integral part of the education system. By leveraging the technology, the online education is gaining popularity and making easier for various people. However, some people believe that class room teaching is irreplaceable.

Classroom learning has been a conventional learning methodology from long time. It really helps students to interact and learn in a collaborative approach. Even from a teacher’s perspective, he/she should be able to assess the students’ performance effectively. For instance, Teacher is teaching some topic and he/should be clarify the doubts of the students and get to know if all of them have really understood the concept by asking queries. Communication is much easier for the students among themselves as well as with the teacher.

With the e-learning is a form of virtual classroom where students can opt for classes as per their convenience. Some students require little more attention comparatively and e-learning helps them to have a dedicated tutors. Even they can find lot of reference material over the web. For instance, website like simplified.com helps in learning new technologies and concepts over the web at your ease. To ensure that student has understood the concept, an assignment is also provided to them before marking it as a completed activity.

I strongly believe that even though the classroom teaching is a conventional style but is an effective mode of teaching. It not only helps students to be more participative but also offers them an environment to learn new things together.

To conclude, online education is not reachable for everyone as it demands a good connectivity which is not affordable by the majority of the people. By the end what really matters how well and effective one understands the concept.

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Appreciate your feedback.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

Overall, a very good essay. Grammar and vocabulary are good in both range and accuracy. Organisation is simple, but very clear and a wide range of connectives are used correctly. Arguments are solid, though sometimes a little more development would be nice.

Well done!
David

[Flick]

Topic:-
Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.

Discuss both views and give your opinion
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Learning is an important and integral part of the education system. By leveraging technology, online education is gaining popularity and making it easier for various people to learn. However, some people believe that class room teaching is irreplaceable.

Classroom learning has been a conventional learning methodology for a long time. It really helps students to interact and learn in a collaborative manner. Even from a teacher’s perspective, he/she should be able to assess the students’ performance effectively. For instance, when the teacher is teaching a topic, he can clarify the doubts of the students and get to know if all of them have really understood the concept by asking questions. Communication is much easier for the students among themselves as well as with the teacher.

E-learning is a form of virtual classroom where students can opt to attend classes as per their convenience. Some students require a little more attention comparatively, and e-learning helps them to find dedicated tutors. Even they can find lot of reference material over the web. For instance, websites like simplified.com helps in learning new technologies and concepts over the web at your ease. To ensure that the student has understood the concept, an assignment is also provided to them before marking it as a completed activity.

I strongly believe that classroom teaching is a conventional style that is an effective mode of teaching. It not only helps students to be more participative, but also offers them an environment to learn new things together.

To conclude, online education is not achievable for everyone as it demands a good internet connection which is not affordable by the majority of people. In the end, what really matters is how well and effective one understands the concept.

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