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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2016 5:38 pm
Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands. To what extent the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
Electronic media is playing pivotal role in making this world as a global village. However, some people may believe that, there are some drawbacks of it. In my opinion, if we look at the benefits and their impact on humanity as a whole , they are far outweighing their disadvantages.
People, whether are living in remote areas of Africa or in Wall Street have type accessibility to internet , through which they can flick through any TV channel or magazine. In this scenario , people from all walk of life are mimicking the same type of way of life. If it is not for their race , colour or language it will become impossible to distinguish between them and it is becoming threatening to their local culture and language. As a consequence to it some of them may go extinct in near future.
This negative impact is not much real because people who opt new trends do not abandoned their own and as a matter of fact they learn new language as their second language. Chinese living in America , for instance, are following their customs and celebrating their local festivals in the same manner they were doing in their home country.
On the other hand , by learning other’s culture bring diversity, compassion and mutual understanding between them, which can help to make this world better place to live in. Because who people follow the same fashion are more likely to get comfortable with each other irrespective of their race colour or language and it can open the for above opportunities. Another important positive point is that, watching TV programs from other culture help viewer to broaden their horizon as they show different things in their own perspective. Last but not the least, standard of living of people is rising because they have more choices to follow and as consequence to all of them world economy is also flourishing.
In conclusion, it is conspicuous from above that benefits are overcoming the negative of following similar trends.
Electronic media is playing pivotal role in making this world as a global village. However, some people may believe that, there are some drawbacks of it. In my opinion, if we look at the benefits and their impact on humanity as a whole , they are far outweighing their disadvantages.
People, whether are living in remote areas of Africa or in Wall Street have type accessibility to internet , through which they can flick through any TV channel or magazine. In this scenario , people from all walk of life are mimicking the same type of way of life. If it is not for their race , colour or language it will become impossible to distinguish between them and it is becoming threatening to their local culture and language. As a consequence to it some of them may go extinct in near future.
This negative impact is not much real because people who opt new trends do not abandoned their own and as a matter of fact they learn new language as their second language. Chinese living in America , for instance, are following their customs and celebrating their local festivals in the same manner they were doing in their home country.
On the other hand , by learning other’s culture bring diversity, compassion and mutual understanding between them, which can help to make this world better place to live in. Because who people follow the same fashion are more likely to get comfortable with each other irrespective of their race colour or language and it can open the for above opportunities. Another important positive point is that, watching TV programs from other culture help viewer to broaden their horizon as they show different things in their own perspective. Last but not the least, standard of living of people is rising because they have more choices to follow and as consequence to all of them world economy is also flourishing.
In conclusion, it is conspicuous from above that benefits are overcoming the negative of following similar trends.