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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example: new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
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Nowadays, there are various courses available as a career option for the students to attend after their schooling. It helps them in preparing themselves for the future. However, there are various reasons which have been explained below as to why people attend colleges or universities.

Schooling helps students in discovering their area of interest by providing the elementary level of education. Therefore, students have to undergo some dedicated courses like B.tech, MBA etc. which help them in expanding their knowledge of the subject in depth. For e.g. Student learns the basic of computers and programming in their school curriculum. In order to improve his expertise, he/she joins a college to undergo a professional course offered by various colleges or universities. Students become more matured and learn doing things more independently in colleges.

I believe colleges play a vital role in creating the next future of the country. By attending the colleges, it helps students in learning more in a practical way and handling the real time problems which they may be facing in their career in future. Students develop more proficiency in their subjects by reading a course for a stipulated time and also interact with a wide range of students. Colleges help in creating a platform and expose them to the corporate world which will help them in shaping their careers. For e.g. lot of IT companies looks for software programmer by recruiting visits campuses in order to recruit the students who would be passing out their courses.

To conclude, it is inevitable for a student to undergo a graduate or master’s courses offered by various universities so that they should be more professional and be able to understand the concept more in detail. This would certainly assist in transforming their thoughts.

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This is a very strange question, because it actually gives you the answers before giving you the question! However, that's not your fault.

Overall, a very good answer. Nice range of vocabulary and grammar. Relatively few mistakes. Clear organisation. But this is an extremely easy question, so don't base your anticipated result on this essay alone. However, it's a very good preparation question.

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David