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essay on global warming

Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2016 5:57 pm
by ucheoma
Production of carbon dioxide and other green house gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming

Why is global warming considered one of the most serious issues nowadays?

How can this problem be solved?

In the contemporary society, there have been an increase in awareness as regards global warming secondary to increased emission of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Carbon dioxide emission is considered dangerous due to the effect of heating up the earth surface and also air pollution. This essay will take a closer look as to why gas emission is considered dangerous and also proffer solutions to this environmental hazard

To begin with, increase carbon dioxide emission leads to so much havoc to earth existence. Firstly, increased gas emission from improper combustion leads to saturation of atmospheric gases thereby leading to a deleterious effect on the ozone layer which is a protective layer of the sun to the earth, thus leading to climate change . Secondly, this effect can cause a disruption of metrology and an unpredictable weather system increasing chances of ecological disaster. Lastly, industrial emission have also produced lots of fumes into the air thereby leading to air pollution. It is no surprise that world leaders gathered in Paris in 2016 to discuss about global warming, where a warning was issued about increase of the earth's heat by one degree and an expected projection by 2020
However, several actions can be taken to mitigate the grave consequences of global warming. Switching from fossil fuel to other renewable sources of energy for example solar energy or hydrophobic energy will help reduce combustion of fossil fuels. Also, putting stiff laws preventing companies from blowing their waste high up in the skies can also be promising. Two months ago, India, one of three countries with increased case of this problem, had passed laws restricting the number of cars that ply the metropolis In a bid to reduce air pollution. The world can learn from this.

In conclusion, global warming is one phenomena that is a threat to the world as it damages the ozone layer increasing the heat of earth as well as causing air pollution . Several action including making laws to limit emission from industries as well as using other alternative sources of energy can be on the rescue

Re: essay on global warming

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2016 6:34 am
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Hello!

The introduction is very good.

In the first main paragraph, the words 'havoc' and 'saturation' are quite extreme and need to be proven.

In the second paragraph, I suspect that India is actually behind other countries, so saying that countries can learn from India is nor really true.

Vocabulary and grammar (both range and accuracy) are very good.

All the best,
David

Re: essay on global warming

Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2016 8:14 pm
by Flick
ucheoma wrote:Production of carbon dioxide and other green house gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming

Why is global warming considered one of the most serious issues nowadays?

How can this problem be solved?

In the contemporary society, there has been an increase in awareness as regards global warming secondary to increased emission of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Carbon dioxide emission is considered dangerous due to the effect of heating up the earth's surface and also air pollution. This essay will take a closer look as to why gas emission is considered dangerous and also proffer solutions to this environmental hazard.

To begin with, increased carbon dioxide emission is a threat to the earth's existence. Firstly, increased gas emission from improper combustion leads to saturation of atmospheric gases, thereby leading to a deleterious effect on the ozone layer which is a protective layer between the sun and the earth, thus leading to climate change. Secondly, this effect can cause a disruption of meteorology and an unpredictable weather system, increasing chances of ecological disaster. Lastly, industrial emissions have also produced lots of fumes into the air thereby leading to air pollution. It is no surprise that world leaders gathered in Paris in 2016 to discuss global warming, where a warning was issued about the increase of the earth's heat by one degree and an expected projection by 2020.

However, several actions can be taken to mitigate the grave consequences of global warming. Switching from fossil fuels such as oil to other renewable sources of energy like solar energy or hydrophobic energy will help reduce air pollution. Also, creating stiff laws preventing companies from blowing their waste high up in the skies could also be effective. Two months ago, India, one of three countries with high levels of pollution, passed laws restricting the number of cars that ply the metropolis in a bid to reduce air pollution. The world can learn from this.

In conclusion, global warming is one phenomenon that is a threat to the world as it damages the ozone layer, increasing the heat of the earth as well as causing air pollution. Several actions including making laws to limit emissions from industries as well as using alternative sources of energy could help to remedy the situation.

Re: essay on global warming

Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2016 12:37 pm
by ucheoma
you are doing a very good work .thank you very much