Page 1 of 1

plesase review the GT task 2

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2016 9:11 am
by DJvj
People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you?

**********************************

Learning is an ongoing and a continuous improvement process. People are getting away from the conventional method of learning where they will learn something only if they are being taught. There are various ways through which people can learn something. Below is the gist of the same.

With the technological advancement, there are plenty of resources available which makes it easier for someone to learn. For e.g. learning a new technology, one can look out for the tutorial available on the internet. Reading helps in understanding others perspective too. People would have written something out of their experience so makes it easy for others not to repeat the same mistakes. Some people prefer to listen through various resources in order to understand certain concepts. For instance, watching a talk over YouTube, podcast to listen through various talks.

I believe the best way to learn through is by doing things. It gives them an enormous self-confidence. It even helps in understanding the concept effectively .You should be able to get into the details of it by doing on your own. For instance, if someone wanted to learn how to cook then he/she should have hands on experience by cooking various things before gaining the expertise in the field. Sometimes, this experience even helps in doing certain things faster.

To conclude, it’s inevitable for person to understand the basics regardless of the mode of learning being used so that he /she should be to cope up with other things quickly. They should be comfortable with the way they use.

****

Appreciate your feedback.

Re: plesase review the GT task 2

Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2016 4:24 pm
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Hello!

Overall, not bad, but for one key point ... the question asks you which is best for YOU!

It's fine to discuss the methods in a general sense, but certainly in the conclusion you should focus on the personal aspect. I would recommend including your personal position in the main paragraphs too, as you deal with each method (should you decide to follow that layout).

Very good vocabulary, including some more modern 'tech' related terms. Grammar is good, with a wide range of structures (though I would like to see more conditionals) and though there are some errors, these do not change meaning or cause confusion.

All the best,
David