please assess my writing task 2
Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 7:57 pm
Many people are convinced that the talents such as, music and sport are features that some people were born with. On the other hand, it is argued that these talents can be taught to children to becobe good athletes or musicians. In this essay, I will discuss the both perspectives.
To begin, it is certainly true that many children have unusual talents. For example, it is not uncommon that we find children with professional abilities to use musical instruments or to be clever athletes. It is sometimes called natural gifts. In addition, if we make a study on two kids in the same age and both of them didn’t receive any kind of education by comparing between their responses to teaching them mathematical basics, they will show different results and responses. Because they have different skills and different types of intelligence. Hence, we can say that they were born with different abilities and certain talents.
However, many people have logical arguments and opinions. First of all, the keys of success are not only related to natural talents, factors like education and hard working help people to achieve their goals. As a result, children who don’t have the natural talents can reach what talented people reach if they receive advanced learning and motivation to work hard. Furthermore, if a talented person didn’t work hard to improve his talent, he will not benefit from it and he will probably lose it.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that many children were born with talents, and these children have bigger chances to success, but they need to work hard to maintain their natural gifts.
To begin, it is certainly true that many children have unusual talents. For example, it is not uncommon that we find children with professional abilities to use musical instruments or to be clever athletes. It is sometimes called natural gifts. In addition, if we make a study on two kids in the same age and both of them didn’t receive any kind of education by comparing between their responses to teaching them mathematical basics, they will show different results and responses. Because they have different skills and different types of intelligence. Hence, we can say that they were born with different abilities and certain talents.
However, many people have logical arguments and opinions. First of all, the keys of success are not only related to natural talents, factors like education and hard working help people to achieve their goals. As a result, children who don’t have the natural talents can reach what talented people reach if they receive advanced learning and motivation to work hard. Furthermore, if a talented person didn’t work hard to improve his talent, he will not benefit from it and he will probably lose it.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that many children were born with talents, and these children have bigger chances to success, but they need to work hard to maintain their natural gifts.