Academic writing 2 correct adn grade please
Posted: Mon May 23, 2016 11:31 am
In the past, most people spent their whole lives in the same village or small town, where all the residents knew each other. Nowadays, many people move to a different place, where they don’t know anyone.
What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
The world is changing. The life is going faster. The people, who born and died in the same place went to the past. Our grandparents and parents knew people in their villages, small towns or neighbourhoods. We do not know anyone even in our closest proximity or our block of flats. We are starting to live in anonymous world.
Looking for a better job, for instance, we move houses and travel to the end of the world. Where we work for such a short time, we could not meet and familiar anybody. And for another better job we move again and again. We are focused on our job thus we have not got time to meet anybody and make friends. Our live is interesting and fast. We travel all over the world, learning new languages, discover new cultures but our life is anonymous for the others. We have not close friends. Our world is not as secure as in the past.
Nevertheless the life went slower in the past. Most people could work all their life in the same manufactures or offices and live in the same place where their born. They had friends from a school and met each other frequently. They knew who was born or who died and who got married or who is new in their community. Houses or flats could be unlocked because the neighbour was very near. Life was easier, more secure but instead more boring. There were more gossips, and keeping something in secret was the most difficult work. Everyone knew everything about anyone.
In conclusion, both: past and nowadays have their advantages and disadvantages. We got something for something else, secure life for adventure, gossip for anonymity, knowing people for meeting people.
What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
The world is changing. The life is going faster. The people, who born and died in the same place went to the past. Our grandparents and parents knew people in their villages, small towns or neighbourhoods. We do not know anyone even in our closest proximity or our block of flats. We are starting to live in anonymous world.
Looking for a better job, for instance, we move houses and travel to the end of the world. Where we work for such a short time, we could not meet and familiar anybody. And for another better job we move again and again. We are focused on our job thus we have not got time to meet anybody and make friends. Our live is interesting and fast. We travel all over the world, learning new languages, discover new cultures but our life is anonymous for the others. We have not close friends. Our world is not as secure as in the past.
Nevertheless the life went slower in the past. Most people could work all their life in the same manufactures or offices and live in the same place where their born. They had friends from a school and met each other frequently. They knew who was born or who died and who got married or who is new in their community. Houses or flats could be unlocked because the neighbour was very near. Life was easier, more secure but instead more boring. There were more gossips, and keeping something in secret was the most difficult work. Everyone knew everything about anyone.
In conclusion, both: past and nowadays have their advantages and disadvantages. We got something for something else, secure life for adventure, gossip for anonymity, knowing people for meeting people.