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The table gives information on the number of people of certain age groups given employment by the different sectors of the Government.
Overall, it is seen that people were given more jobs in the manufacturing sector whilst the accountancy had the lowest figure. Seemingly, all age groups were equally taken.
The figures given in this data shows that manufacturing, health and other employed most people at about 9 to 23 persons in different age-brackets contrary to least seen with accountancy, law and catering at the range of 2 to 9. Law on the other hand had same numbers accepted.
Furthermore, those between 18-25 years are seen to be more received by the retail part of the economy as in relation to the highest numbers seen in other and manufacturing with 21 and 23 persons in those aged 25-40 and 40-65 respectively. However, the least employment number is seen to be 3,2 3, in the different age groups employed in accountancy department, which is relatively the same as seen with the law sector.
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The table gives information on the number of people of certain age groups given employment by the different sectors of the Government.
Overall, it is seen that people were given more jobs in the manufacturing sector whilst the accountancy had the lowest figure. Seemingly, all age groups were equally taken.
The figures given in this data shows that manufacturing, health and other employed most people at about 9 to 23 persons in different age-brackets contrary to least seen with accountancy, law and catering at the range of 2 to 9. Law on the other hand had same numbers accepted.
Furthermore, those between 18-25 years are seen to be more received by the retail part of the economy as in relation to the highest numbers seen in other and manufacturing with 21 and 23 persons in those aged 25-40 and 40-65 respectively. However, the least employment number is seen to be 3,2 3, in the different age groups employed in accountancy department, which is relatively the same as seen with the law sector.
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