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Please assess my writing task 2 - studying outside universities

Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2016 12:19 pm
by schedup
Q. Many people choose to study at universities in another country.
What kind of problems do you think they would encounter and what are the positive aspects of a decision like this?


It is the increasing trend for many people to opt for their studies in outside countries. However, this has generated differing views among the different sector of the people. This essay will try to analyse the pros and cons for studying in these universities which are outside their nation.

On the one hand, many people feels that the pupils going outside for their studies will have several impacts. Firstly, it will be an expensive expenditure where there will be tremendous outflow of cash, impacting the national economy. Secondly, there are also risks of being with the bad companions, thus spoiling themselves while they are away from their beloved ones. Lastly, there will be impact on understanding the cultural values which would affect their adoption. Therefore, it clearly shows why some people are concerned on sending the students outside for their university studies.

On the other hand, there are also many benefits for the pupils to embark their studies outside their nation. Not only, have they got an opportunity to explore and get exposure to the different cultures and development activities, they are exposed to the entire world. They have ample opportunity for them to develop friendships with many nationality whereby the business prospects can be developed. Therefore, it is clearer why some section of people gravitate towards this point of view.

There are benefits as well as drawbacks for having people to study in the outside universities. However, upon analysing the above point of views, it is much clearer that there will be more advantages than implications for having sent students to study outside.

Re: Please assess my writing task 2 - studying outside universities

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2016 3:41 am
by schedup
Dear all,

I would like to request you all to kindly assess my writings. My exam is on 25th June 2016.

Thank you for spending your time.

regards,

Re: Please assess my writing task 2 - studying outside universities

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2016 8:21 pm
by Flick
schedup wrote:Q. Many people choose to study at universities in another country.
What kind of problems do you think they would encounter and what are the positive aspects of a decision like this?


It is the increasing trend for many people to continue their education in another country. However, this has generated differing views among the people. This essay will try to analyse the pros and cons of studying in a foreign university.

On the one hand, many people feel that the pupils traveling abroad for their studies will face several impacts. Firstly, it will be an expensive undertaking where there will be a tremendous outflow of cash, impacting the national economy. Secondly, there are also risks of falling into bad company, thus spoiling themselves while they are away from their loved ones. Lastly, there will be an impact on understanding the cultural values which would affect their adoption. Therefore, it clearly shows why some people are concerned with sending students overseas for their university studies.

On the other hand, there are also many benefits for the pupils studying outside their nation. Not only have they got an opportunity to explore and get exposure to the different cultures and development activities, they are exposed to the entire world. They have ample opportunity to develop friendships with many nationalities, whereby business prospects can be developed. Therefore, it is clear why some people gravitate towards this point of view.

There are benefits as well as drawbacks for having people study in foreign universities. However, upon analysing the above points of view, it is much clearer that there will be more advantages than disadvantages for encouraging students to study abroad.

Re: Please assess my writing task 2 - studying outside universities

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2016 4:50 am
by schedup
Thank you very much for the review. really appreciated