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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2016 2:52 am
Task 1
Topic: The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pir chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The chart illustrates the various reasons of adult people who decide to study. In addition, the given pie chart offers information about the cost of each course should be share by several resources.
According to the chart, two groups of adult people who join in study for being interest in subjects and aiming qualifications are highest, 40% of being interest in subject and 30% of gaining qualifications. Otherwise, the number of people who study for chaining their job or meeting is the lowest from 9 % to 12%. Moreover, the percentage of enhancing prospects of promotion in job is as well as the number of enjoying studying is 20%. The last group of people study because they find the assistance of study, 22%.
Besides, as for the survey of the education cost, each course has to dealt with individual as the highest percentage, 405. In contrast, 35% is paid by employers and the remaining (20%) is subsidized by taxpayer.
Topic: The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pir chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The chart illustrates the various reasons of adult people who decide to study. In addition, the given pie chart offers information about the cost of each course should be share by several resources.
According to the chart, two groups of adult people who join in study for being interest in subjects and aiming qualifications are highest, 40% of being interest in subject and 30% of gaining qualifications. Otherwise, the number of people who study for chaining their job or meeting is the lowest from 9 % to 12%. Moreover, the percentage of enhancing prospects of promotion in job is as well as the number of enjoying studying is 20%. The last group of people study because they find the assistance of study, 22%.
Besides, as for the survey of the education cost, each course has to dealt with individual as the highest percentage, 405. In contrast, 35% is paid by employers and the remaining (20%) is subsidized by taxpayer.