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please review my GT task 2

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2016 12:10 pm
by DJvj
"Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Childhood is an important phase in everyone's life. It is inevitable to monitor the progress of the child's growth so that they nurture well and shouldn't have any impact on their growth.While some parents think that daycare services can assist in the stimulate their growth. However, there are few opponents to this idea. This essay will provide both the view points before giving a reasoned conclusion.

Nowadays , Daycare schools cater the need of the working parents. Firstly , a child can learn through associative learning through various mind games in the center which can help in their brain development. For instance, learning different shapes by showing them or watching video can make them learn effectively about the colors as well. Secondly ,it provides them an environment which helps them to be have a routine and mingle with other children too. Lastly , Professional tutors will always understand the requirement of the children well and educate them skillfully by using technology enabled gadgets.

On the other side of the argument, people prefer to have their family members to look after their children which is a conventional practice happening for a while . Firstly ,a child feel more safer and expressive at home with the people whom he see around all the time. Secondly ,a child gets more attention and even family members can easily determine the need and way to teach them. Lastly , they get more freedom and flexibility for doing task with no constraint of time.

To conclude,I strongly believe that daycare offers more professional way to handling children. It becomes challenging for the older people to handle the children due to various age related issues. Moreover, it will not put much of the burden and expectations on them.

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Re: please review my GT task 2

Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2016 8:46 pm
by Flick
DJvj wrote:"Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Childhood is an important phase in everyone's life. It is essential to monitor the progress of the child's growth so that they are nurtured and shouldn't have any impact on their growth. While some parents think that daycare services can assist in stimulating their growth, there are some opponents to this idea. This essay will provide both viewpoints before giving a reasoned conclusion.

Nowadays, daycare schools cater to the needs of working parents. Firstly, a child can learn through associative learning through various mind games in the center which can help in their brain development. For instance, learning different shapes by showing them or watching videos can help them learn effectively about the colors as well the shapes. Secondly, it provides them with an environment which helps them to have a routine and mingle with other children too. Lastly, professional tutors will always understand the requirements of the children well and educate them skillfully by using technology-enabled gadgets.

On the other side of the argument, people prefer to have their family members look after their children which is a conventional practice that has been used for many years. Firstly, a child feels more safe and expressive at home with the people he sees around all the time. Secondly, a child gets more attention and family members can easily determine their needs and the best way to teach them. Lastly, they get more freedom and flexibility for doing tasks with no time constraint.

To conclude, I strongly believe that daycare offers more professional ways to handle children. It becomes challenging for older people to handle children due to various age related issues. Moreover, it will not put too much burden and expectations on them.

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