Please,guys, can you review my Academic WT2
Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2016 6:11 am
Question WT2: Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer:
Email and messaging have changed our social lives and how all people communicate with their friends. However, it is not so certain that our social lives are worse as a conclude.
In the past, people communicate with paper letter or call on the phone. They used to see each other when they had time. A lot of worker people have busy life, basically they didn't have time to communication with their friends for long times. And finally, relationship between friends just destroyed.
At the present time, contact with friends through the website is not a difficult act. We can send message without leaving house. As a result, people have internet relationships are more closer than reallife relationship. For example, when students don't know their hometask for school, they just text to another student or form-master. In the past, students were supposed to meet in the school library to get homework. But at this moment, students couldn't spend many hours for meeting. This one of the things which has made more people lazy and closed.
Also, I think it is difficult to agree that new social forms of communication have decreased people see each other, In my view, a lot of people go out and see each other easily than past. And now easier to organize events or parties for young people. Especially, events it is a good chance for introduce their friend or himself to each other.
In conclusion, I disagree following topic in the question and believe, what modern forms of communication has improved people's social lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer:
Email and messaging have changed our social lives and how all people communicate with their friends. However, it is not so certain that our social lives are worse as a conclude.
In the past, people communicate with paper letter or call on the phone. They used to see each other when they had time. A lot of worker people have busy life, basically they didn't have time to communication with their friends for long times. And finally, relationship between friends just destroyed.
At the present time, contact with friends through the website is not a difficult act. We can send message without leaving house. As a result, people have internet relationships are more closer than reallife relationship. For example, when students don't know their hometask for school, they just text to another student or form-master. In the past, students were supposed to meet in the school library to get homework. But at this moment, students couldn't spend many hours for meeting. This one of the things which has made more people lazy and closed.
Also, I think it is difficult to agree that new social forms of communication have decreased people see each other, In my view, a lot of people go out and see each other easily than past. And now easier to organize events or parties for young people. Especially, events it is a good chance for introduce their friend or himself to each other.
In conclusion, I disagree following topic in the question and believe, what modern forms of communication has improved people's social lives.