Writing Task 2 - Children and spending more time watching TV
Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2016 2:35 pm
Would you please review my Task 2 writing? 
Studies have shown that children are spending more time watching television and less time doing active or creative activities. Explain why this is the case. Suggest possible measures that can encourage children to participate in active or creative activities.
With the advent of new digital devices like laptops, tablets and smart phones, children have been immensely addicted to TV. They are not interested in doing activities, therefore, some important issues have been arise, such as health problems, lack of social interaction and creativity. Parents and governments should take serious actions to tackle this problem and encourage them to improve their mental abilities.
It has been argued that, watching television continually for hours can lead to health related problems. For example, obesity, that is one of the main issues that has been increased among children in recent years. Moreover, children spend their time alone in front of big screens, they do not interact with their peers. Thus, they do not learn how to socially interact with other children. They cannot talk and express themselves and as a result they become shy and diffident. Besides, another major problem is that they do not know how to be creative and how to do tasks in their own way.
However, some measures can be taken to persuade children to do creative actions. Governments should provide sport facilities for children from all ages to spend their time doing healthy activities that gives them confidence. Therefore, they will have a good feeling about themselves and have the courage to take risks in future. Furthermore, media should create appropriate programs in order to inspire children to be creative and nurture their talent to achieve success. Parent should inform their children about the drawbacks of unreasonably watching TV.
In conclusion, wasting a lot of time watching TV can lead to significant problems, such as health issues, lack of confidence, and avoiding society. Therefore, governments and parents should take the responsibility of this phenomena and try to fix it.
Thanks for your time
Studies have shown that children are spending more time watching television and less time doing active or creative activities. Explain why this is the case. Suggest possible measures that can encourage children to participate in active or creative activities.
With the advent of new digital devices like laptops, tablets and smart phones, children have been immensely addicted to TV. They are not interested in doing activities, therefore, some important issues have been arise, such as health problems, lack of social interaction and creativity. Parents and governments should take serious actions to tackle this problem and encourage them to improve their mental abilities.
It has been argued that, watching television continually for hours can lead to health related problems. For example, obesity, that is one of the main issues that has been increased among children in recent years. Moreover, children spend their time alone in front of big screens, they do not interact with their peers. Thus, they do not learn how to socially interact with other children. They cannot talk and express themselves and as a result they become shy and diffident. Besides, another major problem is that they do not know how to be creative and how to do tasks in their own way.
However, some measures can be taken to persuade children to do creative actions. Governments should provide sport facilities for children from all ages to spend their time doing healthy activities that gives them confidence. Therefore, they will have a good feeling about themselves and have the courage to take risks in future. Furthermore, media should create appropriate programs in order to inspire children to be creative and nurture their talent to achieve success. Parent should inform their children about the drawbacks of unreasonably watching TV.
In conclusion, wasting a lot of time watching TV can lead to significant problems, such as health issues, lack of confidence, and avoiding society. Therefore, governments and parents should take the responsibility of this phenomena and try to fix it.
Thanks for your time