KINDLY EVAULATE MY INTRODUCTION
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2016 8:58 am
Do you agree or disagree that it is almost impossible for women to have a successful career as well as having the full responsibility of raising a family.
Today, we are living in a fast-paced society that is sometimes difficult to catch up. With this, women are claimed not to succeed on attaining a full pledge and established career together with taking a full account on familial responsibilities. In my point of view, I agree with this claim as success in a career requires imminent focus while raising a family also entails countless liabilities, which can not goes hand in hand.
*** Can u help me if my introduction is written correctly and did i cover all the task?
can u help me also how to start my body paragraph because i am really having difficulties starting my essays
thank you so much!
Today, we are living in a fast-paced society that is sometimes difficult to catch up. With this, women are claimed not to succeed on attaining a full pledge and established career together with taking a full account on familial responsibilities. In my point of view, I agree with this claim as success in a career requires imminent focus while raising a family also entails countless liabilities, which can not goes hand in hand.
*** Can u help me if my introduction is written correctly and did i cover all the task?
can u help me also how to start my body paragraph because i am really having difficulties starting my essays
thank you so much!