please grade my essay writing task 1
Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2014 2:43 pm
Write a letter to your manager to inform him you are leaving the job even though you enjoy working here?
a) Tell him why you want to leave the job
b) What you learned from this company
c) what did you enjoy in this company
Hi Dannie,
I got admission in Harvard .So, in order to pursue my studies I have leave the job. As a fresher, I started my career in Isis.
My first assignment is Project A, which is challenging but with Team effort we made it success, and learnt about TEAM WORK.
My second assignment as Business analyst in project B which helped me to improve my communication skills when liaison with the client to understand the business rules.
My third assignment as Team Lead in project c, helped me to improve my management skills.
Different roles in projects helped me to nurture my personality to work efficiently to deliver quality.
I enjoyed the year end parties, team building drill, birthday parties and especially work culture. Thanks for giving the opportunity. I will practise the skills learnt in future projects and moments which I enjoyed in company will remain as memories.
a) Tell him why you want to leave the job
b) What you learned from this company
c) what did you enjoy in this company
Hi Dannie,
I got admission in Harvard .So, in order to pursue my studies I have leave the job. As a fresher, I started my career in Isis.
My first assignment is Project A, which is challenging but with Team effort we made it success, and learnt about TEAM WORK.
My second assignment as Business analyst in project B which helped me to improve my communication skills when liaison with the client to understand the business rules.
My third assignment as Team Lead in project c, helped me to improve my management skills.
Different roles in projects helped me to nurture my personality to work efficiently to deliver quality.
I enjoyed the year end parties, team building drill, birthday parties and especially work culture. Thanks for giving the opportunity. I will practise the skills learnt in future projects and moments which I enjoyed in company will remain as memories.