please assess my writing in task 1
Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2016 9:01 pm
The graph reveals the percentage of growth on wages for somecountry from 1993 to 2003. IT can be clearly seen that the peak was in 1998 and the bottom was in 2002.
In 1993 the growth rate was 2% in contrast with 1994, in which the rate raised to 4%, then falling back to 3% by 1995 and 1996. 1997 was at the same rate as 1994. Alternatively the rate kept increasing until the peak was reached, with 6% growth rate in income.
1999 witnessed a noticable drop to 3% in the growth of wages. 2000 was nearly similar to the previous year. 2001 and 2002 kept dropping by 0.5% from their previous years respectively. At last, by 2003 the rate was 2%, which was a slightly rise from the rate in 2002.
In conclusion, 1998 was flourished in terms of the growth in salaries. The first years were rising at rate until the peak. Then the remaining years kept decreasing in matter of wages rate, until a slight rise in 2003 occurred.
In 1993 the growth rate was 2% in contrast with 1994, in which the rate raised to 4%, then falling back to 3% by 1995 and 1996. 1997 was at the same rate as 1994. Alternatively the rate kept increasing until the peak was reached, with 6% growth rate in income.
1999 witnessed a noticable drop to 3% in the growth of wages. 2000 was nearly similar to the previous year. 2001 and 2002 kept dropping by 0.5% from their previous years respectively. At last, by 2003 the rate was 2%, which was a slightly rise from the rate in 2002.
In conclusion, 1998 was flourished in terms of the growth in salaries. The first years were rising at rate until the peak. Then the remaining years kept decreasing in matter of wages rate, until a slight rise in 2003 occurred.