kindly assess my Wr1ting Task 1
Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2016 10:11 pm
Hello all, here's my essay. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you.
The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.
The two graphs give information about the value of fuel and other selected exports in year 2000 to 2005. As shown, it is clear that the trend varies with these three products; fuel, food and manufactured goods.
In total value of fuel exported in year 2000, there was $300000 million sent overseas. However, it slowly declined from year 2001 and dropped further the following year to $250,000 million. Even so, it recovered and gradually increased to $350,000 by year 2003 and reached to 425,000 in 2005.
On the other hand, the value selected exports can be noted that food is not as popular as the other two. the figure shows that it is less than a $100,000 million from 2000 to 2005. It never go up like the rest, just remained monotonous. Whilst, manufactured goods started at approximately $180,000 in year 2000 then slightly inclined the next year and downward the succeeding year. Nonetheless, recovered eventually in 2005. As for fuel it produced $450,000 million in the beginning but went downhill and leveled at $200,000 million in 2005.
The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.
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The two graphs give information about the value of fuel and other selected exports in year 2000 to 2005. As shown, it is clear that the trend varies with these three products; fuel, food and manufactured goods.
In total value of fuel exported in year 2000, there was $300000 million sent overseas. However, it slowly declined from year 2001 and dropped further the following year to $250,000 million. Even so, it recovered and gradually increased to $350,000 by year 2003 and reached to 425,000 in 2005.
On the other hand, the value selected exports can be noted that food is not as popular as the other two. the figure shows that it is less than a $100,000 million from 2000 to 2005. It never go up like the rest, just remained monotonous. Whilst, manufactured goods started at approximately $180,000 in year 2000 then slightly inclined the next year and downward the succeeding year. Nonetheless, recovered eventually in 2005. As for fuel it produced $450,000 million in the beginning but went downhill and leveled at $200,000 million in 2005.