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[Hanin]

Today, good health is essential among people. As the need for good health increases, medical service providers make use of their products to gain profit. Do you believe that the medical services should be run by profit making companies? do you think that the disadvantages of the private health care outweigh the advantages?


As the world paves its way to becoming better, excellent health is also gaining its popularity among people. This is then being taken profitably by medical service providers through medical products. With issues in between private and public sectors, it is believed that the medical services should be run by profit oriented companies. Albeit bombarded with both positive and negative feedback, it is felt that private health is predominantly advantageous. This will be proven by looking at how standardized medical services become and unbiased quality health care are made available to the people.

First, medical services offered by private health sectors are deemed towards excellent health care deliverance aligned with the standard practice of health. For instance, Bethany hospital is an up-to-date private institution that is flexible in catering all sorts of health state, as it has several competitive hospitals around the province of Leyte. With this kind of competition, the people are ensured of a health service that meets one's needs and expectations that are quite non existent in public hospitals due to insufficient funds to make it up-to-the-minute. Ergo, this proves the argument that the disadvantages do not outweigh the advantages.

Second, unbiased quality health care may be observed in private health institutions. An exemplification of this is my very own experience working in a private hospital as a nurse. We cater patients regardless of age, gender, race and financial status for as long as we render our professional nursing care and in exchange for the service, they are obliged to pay hospital bills. This kind of business is a win-win type one. Unlike in public institutions, hospital staff may prioritize patients they personally know. This example clearly strengthens one of the positive sides of private hospitals.

Provided with these ideas of private health care, it is clear that profit making companies should manage the health services of the people. It is thus hoped these points gain support in the foreseeable future.

[Hanin]

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[Hanin]