Task 2. Effects of global warming. Please evaluate
Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2017 10:11 am
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Question:
Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What effects are there to this problem.
Response:
In the recent years, global warming is becoming more and more threating problem to nature and mankind in the world. Althoug it is still debated by many, it is felt that human factor makes the major impact on the environment and causes global warming. In this essay, it will be reviewed this cause and possible effects to this global issue.
Firstly, it is believed that human activities around the world cause global warming. For instance, according to the website Wikipedia, carbon gases emissions, wich emitted as a result of fossil fuel firing in industry, contribute to accumulation of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere more and more every day. As this example shows, further expanding of manufacture working on fossil fuel can led to an extremly tremendous threat to the environment as well as to humanity as a whole. Following this, it is obvious that immediate steps should be done in international level to limit such type of business and as a result, to eliminate developing of negative consequences.
Unfortunately, consequences of global warming are absolutely negative and worring. For example, the nature gives own first signs about it through environmental cataclysms, such as floods, storms, wildfires, wich are becoming more frequent in the last time. To make things worse, one more evidence is the rise in level of the world's sea which threatens low lying lands. When looking at these evidences, it is clear that these effects of global warming can be potentially devastating.
In conclusion, following everything mentioned above, it is clear that industry working on fossil fuel is a potentially great threat to the environment as well as humanity and it can led to global consequences, particularly nature cataclysms and loss of inhabited lands. Hence, governments of all countries in the world should undertake prompt actions to reduce such industry in order to avoid these terribly undesirable consequences in foreseeable future.
Many thanks in advance
Question:
Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What effects are there to this problem.
Response:
In the recent years, global warming is becoming more and more threating problem to nature and mankind in the world. Althoug it is still debated by many, it is felt that human factor makes the major impact on the environment and causes global warming. In this essay, it will be reviewed this cause and possible effects to this global issue.
Firstly, it is believed that human activities around the world cause global warming. For instance, according to the website Wikipedia, carbon gases emissions, wich emitted as a result of fossil fuel firing in industry, contribute to accumulation of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere more and more every day. As this example shows, further expanding of manufacture working on fossil fuel can led to an extremly tremendous threat to the environment as well as to humanity as a whole. Following this, it is obvious that immediate steps should be done in international level to limit such type of business and as a result, to eliminate developing of negative consequences.
Unfortunately, consequences of global warming are absolutely negative and worring. For example, the nature gives own first signs about it through environmental cataclysms, such as floods, storms, wildfires, wich are becoming more frequent in the last time. To make things worse, one more evidence is the rise in level of the world's sea which threatens low lying lands. When looking at these evidences, it is clear that these effects of global warming can be potentially devastating.
In conclusion, following everything mentioned above, it is clear that industry working on fossil fuel is a potentially great threat to the environment as well as humanity and it can led to global consequences, particularly nature cataclysms and loss of inhabited lands. Hence, governments of all countries in the world should undertake prompt actions to reduce such industry in order to avoid these terribly undesirable consequences in foreseeable future.