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Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2017 10:32 am
Raising up children as good members of society has been a controversial debate throughout history with strong and motive argument presented on both sides , while some people think it is a duty of their parents , others believe that it is a school mission to teach children to be good members of society. Both sides will be discussed in this essay
Undoubtedly , the most valuable parenthood' duty is providing society with good educated generation , Children at their first years of life always take their parents as role models and frequently imitate them in their actions so it is the responsibility of parents to carefully look after their children and teach them how to be good citizens . For instance , once i was a child my father always was keen to do some of his work and prayers everyday in front of my eyes to instil these good manners into my mind passively and as a result it became a strict rule in my life to keep doing my prayers and duties daily . As this example shows it is clear that parents have a major participation in introducing good members to society
On the other hand , many people argue that schools have the great role in teaching children and they are logically right due to the long hours children spend daily at their schools so schools have a better chance to teach and instruct them , also it is scientifically proved that children learn better when they are surrounded by friends of their age , additionally , governments nowadays apply qualified protocols and community standards to be included in the curriculum of education to instil good manners and behaviours into child's mind
In conclusion , serving society with good members is a mixed duty of parents and schools and it is recommend to maintain a well cooperation between.
Undoubtedly , the most valuable parenthood' duty is providing society with good educated generation , Children at their first years of life always take their parents as role models and frequently imitate them in their actions so it is the responsibility of parents to carefully look after their children and teach them how to be good citizens . For instance , once i was a child my father always was keen to do some of his work and prayers everyday in front of my eyes to instil these good manners into my mind passively and as a result it became a strict rule in my life to keep doing my prayers and duties daily . As this example shows it is clear that parents have a major participation in introducing good members to society
On the other hand , many people argue that schools have the great role in teaching children and they are logically right due to the long hours children spend daily at their schools so schools have a better chance to teach and instruct them , also it is scientifically proved that children learn better when they are surrounded by friends of their age , additionally , governments nowadays apply qualified protocols and community standards to be included in the curriculum of education to instil good manners and behaviours into child's mind
In conclusion , serving society with good members is a mixed duty of parents and schools and it is recommend to maintain a well cooperation between.
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