Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be

[kongu.suresh]

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.
Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be
useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Can you please suggest on my grammer and essay response.
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some people argue that all the college students should be allowed to study the subjects they are interested in, whereas other argue that they should be allowed to study only the subjects that are useful in future, such as science and technology. Although studying subjects such as maths and science may lead to new innovation, customary subjects are as valid as science and technology because these subjects are useful for social balances.

On the one hand, imposing only curriculums related to science and technology in the university may lead to new discovery for a common problem such as diabetes and cancer. Science and mathematics are key to a medical research and enforcing students to study this subjects may provide them with in-depth knowledge and may help someone to find a cure for diseases which threaten the world. It is evident from the medical findings after many countries increase their medical schools. However, forcing students to study a particular subject, which they are not interested in, may lead to poor performance in academic.

On the other hand, traditional courses are valid as science-oriented subjects because it would create social balance in the society. If people were studied science and technology, it would exacerbate unemployment and may lead to unavailability of teachers and other industry. For example, as per the recent report from England education department reported a shortage of qualified teachers after the emergence of information technology. Therefore, it is vital to have the balanced approach in academic.

To conclude, although pushing students to science and technology related subjects would assist to find new products which may ameliorate people living standard, leaving other subjects may create social imbalance so I believe balance approach is needed.

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Regards

Suresh