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Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2017 10:31 pm
You lost a bag while you are traveling back home by the British Airlines Flight No. 7846 London – Cairo. It has been two weeks and you haven’t received any news about it yet. Write a letter to the Airlines manager asking him about the steps taken by the company.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the actions taken on your part regarding my lost bag on flight no. 7846 London – Cairo. Allow me to elaborate more on this situation.
It all started when I forgot my bag inside the airplane on that flight. When I arrived at home, I realized that a bag was missing. I decided to call your airline to report that incident, and I was told that they would investigate that issue and get my belongings back. In fact, I was relieved by that reassurance to some extent. Now, it has been two weeks since that phone call without a reply. Therefore, I am sending you now a reminder to follow up my case.
I would be grateful if you could take decisive steps on this issue as the contents of this bag are very valuable to me. I am at your disposal should you require further details about that bag.
Thanks for your time and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
John Brown
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the actions taken on your part regarding my lost bag on flight no. 7846 London – Cairo. Allow me to elaborate more on this situation.
It all started when I forgot my bag inside the airplane on that flight. When I arrived at home, I realized that a bag was missing. I decided to call your airline to report that incident, and I was told that they would investigate that issue and get my belongings back. In fact, I was relieved by that reassurance to some extent. Now, it has been two weeks since that phone call without a reply. Therefore, I am sending you now a reminder to follow up my case.
I would be grateful if you could take decisive steps on this issue as the contents of this bag are very valuable to me. I am at your disposal should you require further details about that bag.
Thanks for your time and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
John Brown