Kindly check my writing task1 (student enrolments)

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The given bar graph illustrates student enrolments at the University of Westchester in four catagories, which are male, female, aged 25+, and international students. As a whole, a total number of student enrolments increases from 1875 to 2024.

Generally, male students shows a rise in number from just around 1000 in 1875-1899 to 15000 in 1975-1999, but then shows a small fall in 2000-2024. Female student enrolments as well as mature students (aged 25+) have been introduced after male students for about one year (in 1900-1924). However, international students were introduced a year later than female and mature students. One obvious fact is that there is no drop in the amount of student enrolments in female, mature (aged 25+), and international students from time to time.

Male students are almost always the majority of pupils in the University of Weschester except the last set of data (from 2000-2024), which the ratio of each catagory is quite similar.