Writing Task 1 - Italy and Yemen projections for ages of the population
Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2017 8:28 pm
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If it is possible could someone assess my writing task? Thanks in advance.
The pie charts demonstrate the ages of the habitants of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and what are the predictions for these countries after five decades. The ages are divided in three categories: 0-14 years, 15-59 years, and 60 years and above.
Yemen’s pie chart shows a population most represented by children and adults, followed by a small percentage of elders. Just over half the population of Yemen was comprised of children (50,1%) in 2000. It is predicted that this number will have a dramatic reduction by 2050, reaching 37%, while adults will be the majority of the population (57,3%). Elderly people are predicted to have a slight increase (3,6% to 5,7%) after five decades.
In 2000, adults comprised the majority of the habitants in Italy, followed by children and elders. The predictions for 2050 figure is that adults will continue to be the largest age population (46,2%) in Italy, followed by a close number of 60 years and above (42,3%).
The pie charts predict that the ages of the population from Yemen and Italy will both increase for elderly people while the youngest generation of the figures will decrease in the next five decades.
If it is possible could someone assess my writing task? Thanks in advance.
The pie charts demonstrate the ages of the habitants of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and what are the predictions for these countries after five decades. The ages are divided in three categories: 0-14 years, 15-59 years, and 60 years and above.
Yemen’s pie chart shows a population most represented by children and adults, followed by a small percentage of elders. Just over half the population of Yemen was comprised of children (50,1%) in 2000. It is predicted that this number will have a dramatic reduction by 2050, reaching 37%, while adults will be the majority of the population (57,3%). Elderly people are predicted to have a slight increase (3,6% to 5,7%) after five decades.
In 2000, adults comprised the majority of the habitants in Italy, followed by children and elders. The predictions for 2050 figure is that adults will continue to be the largest age population (46,2%) in Italy, followed by a close number of 60 years and above (42,3%).
The pie charts predict that the ages of the population from Yemen and Italy will both increase for elderly people while the youngest generation of the figures will decrease in the next five decades.