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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2017 2:01 pm
The Question is : Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research , business and academic world . others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion . Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience .
The source is Cambridge IELTS 12 - Test 5 page 28
My essay on which I need the feedback :
Everything has pros and cons and globalization is not an exception . The internet as the most tangible form of globalization has been always correlating to the spread of knowledge allover the globe . While this globalization has brought many benifits an scientific and educational fields , the debate about some undesirable implications has not been settled yet .
To begin , nowadays internet bulletins and radio broadcasts flash away news instantly allowing people to be instantly informed about political , economical and scientific news . In business fields - in particular - it would be crucial to have an easy access to up-to-date changes in stock market .
Not to mention , in scientific research , the latest knowledge available online avert wasting effort and time studying what had been already discovered . To put it another way , researchers start their work from where previous scientific knowledge ended . If scientific progress haven,t been shared around the world , scientists would have been replicating areas of research and squandering terrific budgets in fruitless work .
In addition , sharing information has aided students - especially - in tertiary education stages to keep up with their study . For instance , an opinion poll was carried out in Cairo University having its impetus focused on the significance of the internet - as the main way of sharing lectures - in their study . Most students averred that they would have been lost without sharing lectures and study essays and papers .
On the other hand , some people argue that exchanging knowledge easily has brought problems as well . To cite an example , In 1999 in America the well-known novelist Nicolas Sparks filed a claim against the manager of an online forum accusing him of copyright infringement by sharing his new novel ( message in a bottle ) for free affecting the sales of the original version of the novel .
Moreover , the flexibility of exchanging information has made plagiarism very common . In other words , it has been very common to find someone stealing other people work and assigning it to themselves .
Furthermore , exchanging information freely has caused rumers to be raised and spread easily causing political upheavals in countries .
Looking at both sides of discussion , it has been candid that exchanging knowledge is benifical as long as people observe laws organizing this .
To sum up , my own sentiments are on par with the idea that the advantages of sharing knowledge highly outweighs the disadvantages .
End of the essay .. Thank you in advance ..
The source is Cambridge IELTS 12 - Test 5 page 28
My essay on which I need the feedback :
Everything has pros and cons and globalization is not an exception . The internet as the most tangible form of globalization has been always correlating to the spread of knowledge allover the globe . While this globalization has brought many benifits an scientific and educational fields , the debate about some undesirable implications has not been settled yet .
To begin , nowadays internet bulletins and radio broadcasts flash away news instantly allowing people to be instantly informed about political , economical and scientific news . In business fields - in particular - it would be crucial to have an easy access to up-to-date changes in stock market .
Not to mention , in scientific research , the latest knowledge available online avert wasting effort and time studying what had been already discovered . To put it another way , researchers start their work from where previous scientific knowledge ended . If scientific progress haven,t been shared around the world , scientists would have been replicating areas of research and squandering terrific budgets in fruitless work .
In addition , sharing information has aided students - especially - in tertiary education stages to keep up with their study . For instance , an opinion poll was carried out in Cairo University having its impetus focused on the significance of the internet - as the main way of sharing lectures - in their study . Most students averred that they would have been lost without sharing lectures and study essays and papers .
On the other hand , some people argue that exchanging knowledge easily has brought problems as well . To cite an example , In 1999 in America the well-known novelist Nicolas Sparks filed a claim against the manager of an online forum accusing him of copyright infringement by sharing his new novel ( message in a bottle ) for free affecting the sales of the original version of the novel .
Moreover , the flexibility of exchanging information has made plagiarism very common . In other words , it has been very common to find someone stealing other people work and assigning it to themselves .
Furthermore , exchanging information freely has caused rumers to be raised and spread easily causing political upheavals in countries .
Looking at both sides of discussion , it has been candid that exchanging knowledge is benifical as long as people observe laws organizing this .
To sum up , my own sentiments are on par with the idea that the advantages of sharing knowledge highly outweighs the disadvantages .
End of the essay .. Thank you in advance ..