Task 2 Example: Please evaluate my essay
Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2017 12:31 pm
Thesis: Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays people work globally to win their living, but on flip side there are too many who work for a good salary. Happiness in profession comes in two directions, a well payed wage and professional fulfilment. There are pro and cons, wich between them is more weighty.
First of all, I strongly believe that without being happy with your every day duties, is like being a machine earning money. If employees won't love what they do, they will face lack of motivation and their performance probably will degrade. For instance, let suppose that an engineer will make repetitive and procedurial tasks, rather than performing crative and ambitous projects. He will be boring soon. His self-confidence and self-esteem will decrease tremendously. Inductivity of the employees will be transmitted to the companies and this might cause negative effects in future financial incomes.
On the other hand, without justification of a good perfomances with monetary value and honoring is a deprivation from success. Earning too much, or at least enough to live a normal life in my opinion is a barrier to break it. Furthermore while you are not supported financially in order to grow a family, buy a house, etc, but you are satisfied with your job, it's time to look after other possibilities with higher standarts.
To sum up, in my view a high standart wage comes with a good career, mixed with the fate, right moment and success, therefore a combination of job happiness and a well payed occupation would be perfect. It is crucial to grow professionally and moneys will come to you, so satisfaction is undisputed.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays people work globally to win their living, but on flip side there are too many who work for a good salary. Happiness in profession comes in two directions, a well payed wage and professional fulfilment. There are pro and cons, wich between them is more weighty.
First of all, I strongly believe that without being happy with your every day duties, is like being a machine earning money. If employees won't love what they do, they will face lack of motivation and their performance probably will degrade. For instance, let suppose that an engineer will make repetitive and procedurial tasks, rather than performing crative and ambitous projects. He will be boring soon. His self-confidence and self-esteem will decrease tremendously. Inductivity of the employees will be transmitted to the companies and this might cause negative effects in future financial incomes.
On the other hand, without justification of a good perfomances with monetary value and honoring is a deprivation from success. Earning too much, or at least enough to live a normal life in my opinion is a barrier to break it. Furthermore while you are not supported financially in order to grow a family, buy a house, etc, but you are satisfied with your job, it's time to look after other possibilities with higher standarts.
To sum up, in my view a high standart wage comes with a good career, mixed with the fate, right moment and success, therefore a combination of job happiness and a well payed occupation would be perfect. It is crucial to grow professionally and moneys will come to you, so satisfaction is undisputed.