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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2018 5:20 pm
You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Dear Zubair,
I hope you are fine. Let me invite you to an amazing party, we planned for Mr. Kashif.
As you may have noticed, Kashif has been absent from few classes recently. You may be aware that he has been through some personal issues which have affected his mood and attitude in class negatively. Since, his family was not available here to console him, his situation was aggravated. Luckily, his birthday is round the corner and we have planned an amazing surprising party to alleviate his sad feelings.
Since many students are not residing in hostels, weekend would be an ideal time for party, I imagine. I would suggest 7 pm in evening so that everyone could easily attend the party.
To make event a memorable, I am requesting all classmates to bring some gift, sweets and some fire cracks in party.
Looking forward to see you in party,
XYZ
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Dear Zubair,
I hope you are fine. Let me invite you to an amazing party, we planned for Mr. Kashif.
As you may have noticed, Kashif has been absent from few classes recently. You may be aware that he has been through some personal issues which have affected his mood and attitude in class negatively. Since, his family was not available here to console him, his situation was aggravated. Luckily, his birthday is round the corner and we have planned an amazing surprising party to alleviate his sad feelings.
Since many students are not residing in hostels, weekend would be an ideal time for party, I imagine. I would suggest 7 pm in evening so that everyone could easily attend the party.
To make event a memorable, I am requesting all classmates to bring some gift, sweets and some fire cracks in party.
Looking forward to see you in party,
XYZ