Writing Task 1 - Evaluation needed
Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2020 7:02 pm
Dear Friends,
Could you evaluate my task 1 practice test please?
The chart is attached.
Thanks so much in advance.
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of men and women from 15 to 75+ years old, who were working during 2013 in a nation from Europe. Overall, it can be seen that almost in every age the quantity of men employed was higher than women.
First of all, the highest quantity of males and females employed were aged 40-44, reaching almost six hundred thousand, whereas the lowest were over 75 years old, at less than 10 thousand. It can be seen that as the age goes up, the amount of employed people rose.
On the other hand, after 44 years old, the number of people of both sex began to decrease. After 15 years from the highest level, only about half of the citizens were still employed, at 300 and 200 thousand for men and women respectively.
To sum up, regardless of the gender, number of workers went up until 40-44 years old, then started to go down until over 75 years old.
Could you evaluate my task 1 practice test please?
The chart is attached.
Thanks so much in advance.
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of men and women from 15 to 75+ years old, who were working during 2013 in a nation from Europe. Overall, it can be seen that almost in every age the quantity of men employed was higher than women.
First of all, the highest quantity of males and females employed were aged 40-44, reaching almost six hundred thousand, whereas the lowest were over 75 years old, at less than 10 thousand. It can be seen that as the age goes up, the amount of employed people rose.
On the other hand, after 44 years old, the number of people of both sex began to decrease. After 15 years from the highest level, only about half of the citizens were still employed, at 300 and 200 thousand for men and women respectively.
To sum up, regardless of the gender, number of workers went up until 40-44 years old, then started to go down until over 75 years old.
