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The line graphs illustrate the percentages of household recycling in the UK, Germany and France from 2005 to 2015. Overall, these rates for the UK and Germany witness a gradual increase while the rate for France generally declines.
In 2005, Britain and Germany had a low proportion of recycling at 35% and 20% respectively. Over the following four years, British and German household recycling rates steadily climbed to roughly 40% and 32%, nearly the same as France at approximately 32% in 2009. Then, these percentages increased significantly by approximately 15% and 12% in the next two years and finally reached their peaks at 60% and 50% in 2015.
In contrast, despite of being the highest recycling rate among these three countries at the beginning of the period, the French figure in 2013 dropped to nearly 30% from 50% in the year 2005. However, this figure has broadened since 2005 and reached 40% in 2015.
The line graphs illustrate the percentages of household recycling in the UK, Germany and France from 2005 to 2015. Overall, these rates for the UK and Germany witness a gradual increase while the rate for France generally declines.
In 2005, Britain and Germany had a low proportion of recycling at 35% and 20% respectively. Over the following four years, British and German household recycling rates steadily climbed to roughly 40% and 32%, nearly the same as France at approximately 32% in 2009. Then, these percentages increased significantly by approximately 15% and 12% in the next two years and finally reached their peaks at 60% and 50% in 2015.
In contrast, despite of being the highest recycling rate among these three countries at the beginning of the period, the French figure in 2013 dropped to nearly 30% from 50% in the year 2005. However, this figure has broadened since 2005 and reached 40% in 2015.
