General Training Writing Task 2 about Curfew
Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2021 2:27 am
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In some areas of the US , a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this ?
Many of the State's streets might be dangerous to walk through during late times of the night. Several illegal activities arose during that period of the night. Hence, it is preferable to keep young people and teenagers away from such areas. For that reason, the government took a sensible decision to force a curfew during the night on those below age unless they are accompanied by an adult. These actions have taken place to assure those young individual's safety and well-being both physically and psychologically.
Firstly, the rape-accidents count has dramatically risen recently. Whereas, most of those accidents are reported during the late-night. In that sense, several streets in the United States were considered severely threatening. For instance, if a teenage girl was subjected to any harassment or even a rape incident, it would change that girl's life drastically. Many research studies showed that 95% of young girls who experienced such hardship suffer from several severe psychological damages.
Secondly, most of the parents are concerned about their teenage-children staying late outdoors. Whereas, other illegal practices are actively available during the night, such as theft under weapon-threat, kidnapping for trading organs purposes, and many others. Consequently, one could be exposed to a terrifying experience that can go to the extend of costing one's life.
In conclusion, young people should firmly be urged to stay at home during the night, to avoid facing any unfortunate experience. I strongly agree with the curfew subjected to people at a young age concerning their safety.
Thank you in advance
In some areas of the US , a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this ?
Many of the State's streets might be dangerous to walk through during late times of the night. Several illegal activities arose during that period of the night. Hence, it is preferable to keep young people and teenagers away from such areas. For that reason, the government took a sensible decision to force a curfew during the night on those below age unless they are accompanied by an adult. These actions have taken place to assure those young individual's safety and well-being both physically and psychologically.
Firstly, the rape-accidents count has dramatically risen recently. Whereas, most of those accidents are reported during the late-night. In that sense, several streets in the United States were considered severely threatening. For instance, if a teenage girl was subjected to any harassment or even a rape incident, it would change that girl's life drastically. Many research studies showed that 95% of young girls who experienced such hardship suffer from several severe psychological damages.
Secondly, most of the parents are concerned about their teenage-children staying late outdoors. Whereas, other illegal practices are actively available during the night, such as theft under weapon-threat, kidnapping for trading organs purposes, and many others. Consequently, one could be exposed to a terrifying experience that can go to the extend of costing one's life.
In conclusion, young people should firmly be urged to stay at home during the night, to avoid facing any unfortunate experience. I strongly agree with the curfew subjected to people at a young age concerning their safety.
Thank you in advance
