please help to grade my writing practice
Posted: Fri May 09, 2014 8:46 am
Task 1
You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• Describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would continue at this time
You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter with:
Dear ……….,
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform that I would like to put my part-time evening course on halt due to unforeseen changes to my employment. My name is Dominic Poon, a student from class B-113 which majoring in 3D animation at your school.
I recently got promoted to a senior animator in my company after my 3 years of employment in this establishment, and I have been given an opportunity to participate in an off-shore training which will be useful for knowledge expansion and further career advancement.
Due to the reason above, I will be away from Malaysia for six months from June till the end of the year; therefore I am not able to attend the classes. I would like to request for a temporary halt to my course when I am away, and be able to continue again once my training is over by the end of the year.
I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Dominic Poon.
You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• Describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would continue at this time
You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter with:
Dear ……….,
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform that I would like to put my part-time evening course on halt due to unforeseen changes to my employment. My name is Dominic Poon, a student from class B-113 which majoring in 3D animation at your school.
I recently got promoted to a senior animator in my company after my 3 years of employment in this establishment, and I have been given an opportunity to participate in an off-shore training which will be useful for knowledge expansion and further career advancement.
Due to the reason above, I will be away from Malaysia for six months from June till the end of the year; therefore I am not able to attend the classes. I would like to request for a temporary halt to my course when I am away, and be able to continue again once my training is over by the end of the year.
I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Dominic Poon.