Please criticize my letter
Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:07 pm
You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing to formally inform you for why I cannot continue my evening course further. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation.
As you know, I am full time involved in a full day job. Although my job description demand my eight hours duty only but unfortunately a recent development has changed this scenario totally. My company is engaged in an tight schedule project and I am given a key responsibility in this project. Pertinently, I am expected to work for extended hours. This extra work burden not only consumes my time but also deprive me off my energies, when I exit office.
Due to my key role and my extensive involvement in this important task, I am unable to continue my evening course further. Even if I spare half hour each day, I cannot focus to absorb course material due to lack of energy. Hence, my involvement in this course cannot be a possibly in near future.
I understand that this course has utmost important for my career and in addition I like this course for my personal attitude tendency would like to withdraw from this course for temporary but undefined time period will immediately re-join once I get my assignment finished.
Waiting for a hopeful reply,
Saqib.
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing to formally inform you for why I cannot continue my evening course further. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation.
As you know, I am full time involved in a full day job. Although my job description demand my eight hours duty only but unfortunately a recent development has changed this scenario totally. My company is engaged in an tight schedule project and I am given a key responsibility in this project. Pertinently, I am expected to work for extended hours. This extra work burden not only consumes my time but also deprive me off my energies, when I exit office.
Due to my key role and my extensive involvement in this important task, I am unable to continue my evening course further. Even if I spare half hour each day, I cannot focus to absorb course material due to lack of energy. Hence, my involvement in this course cannot be a possibly in near future.
I understand that this course has utmost important for my career and in addition I like this course for my personal attitude tendency would like to withdraw from this course for temporary but undefined time period will immediately re-join once I get my assignment finished.
Waiting for a hopeful reply,
Saqib.