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[saqibali]

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain
1. Why you are writing to him
2. Why you cannot pay the rent
3. When you will pay the rent.



Dear Manager,
Ship Rent Ltd.

I am writing to request you to allow me pay my house rent later. Please allow me to elaborate on exactly why I am requesting this favor.

Unfortunately, I have come across unforeseen expenses which have put me in financial trouble. As a result, I need your kind support to meet my tough financial budget.

This month, I come across an expected marriage of a friend.I have had to purchase many clothes as well as many gifts to honor my friend. Such sudden expenses are met through loans which I have to clear this month. For these reasons, I am unable to pay rent of this month.

Since I am expecting a bonus from my company next month, so I will be in strong position to pay the rent next month.


Waiting a hopeful reply,

[Flick]

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain
1. Why you are writing to him
2. Why you cannot pay the rent
3. When you will pay the rent.



Dear Manager,
Ship Rent Ltd. (<-- Delete this. It is not necessary.)

I am writing to request you allow me to pay my house rent later. Please allow me to elaborate on exactly why I am requesting this favor.

Unfortunately, I have come across some unforeseen expenses which have put me in financial difficulty. As a result, I need your kind support to meet my tough financial budget.

This month, I have had to purchase many clothes as well as many gifts to honor my friend, who is getting married. Because of these sudden expenses, I have had to take out a loan, which is due to be repaid this month. For these reasons, I am unable to pay rent this month.

Since I am expecting a bonus from my company next month, I will be in strong position to pay the rent next month.


Yours Sincerely,

[saqibali]

Thanks for your corrections.
Can you kindly assign me a band?