Academic Writing task 2

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Academic Task 2 :

Topic :

Whilst studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one's experience, it also presents the danger of negative influence from the host culture.

How far do you agree or disagree with the statement ?

Essay :

Education in foreign universities provides vast number of opportunities either in the form of learning or in the form of experience, although it has certain drawbacks like life style and culture. I feel the advantages definitely overweigh the disadvantages of abroad studies.

Firstly, candidates can interact with different people from all over the world. It improves their ability to communicate in different languages and they can make new friends. Furthermore living in a foreign country push them towards socialising themselves with the professors and other team mates.

In addition to the above skills, they will have many opportunities to pursue in different fields like Sciences and Technologies. Studying and working on the project , which the person likes provide the required energy and enthusiasm . Moreover students can access the resources like Labs,test centers, Which were not available in their home country . By all the means they will posses required knowledge and experience by the time of completing their studies , which makes them competent to work in their field. For instance my brother who studied in abroad is more confident than ever before.

However, there are certain limmitations in studying abroad due to difference in culture like changes in life style and dressing sense etc. Even eating and drinking habits might impact one's life tremendously.

To conclude , knowledge and skills gained in a foreign land provides a plan to one's carrer and the impact of culture can be temporary on their life.

[saqibali]

I supposed, its an older post.
Do you still need to correct this essay?