Please assess my general training writing task 2
Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2014 8:20 pm
Many people like to wear fashionable clothes
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this good thing or bad thing?
Lots of individual nowadays, are keen on going with the flow, most especially in the new
trend of stylish design in apparel clothing. This has been obvious with the people living
in the rural area. A city lifestyle is required to be up to date in fashion trend, plus those
billboard advertising which can be seen all over the metro has a tremendous impact in
attracting customers.There are pro's and con when it comes to be always inline in terms of
wearing signature clothes.
A typical working person living in the city need a decent clothes to wear everyday. This is
the standard norms especially to the people in the corporate world. In addition to that,
a hardworking person with presentable attire is very pleasing in the eyes of the boss. Thus,
being in line with trendy clothes show how we represent ourselves with other people.
On the other hand, marketing companies using known personalities to endorse their product is quite
effective in their strategy. This is can be seen with most of the people buying and wearing their
stuff even if the cost is very pricey. Furthermore, people tend to max out their credit
card just to buy the things they saw from the advertisement. Hence, this will lead them being
drown to debt because of uncontrolled spending.
In accommodating the current trend in the fashion industry it is a temptation that hard to resist.
However, this might create a great havoc in a person financial life, not knowing how to control
our spending habit. It is expected that fashion industry will continue to grow but let's keep in mind
that there are more important things to spend our money rather than buying signature clothes.
NB: Your constructive criticism will be of much help for me to make a better essay in my coming exam.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this good thing or bad thing?
Lots of individual nowadays, are keen on going with the flow, most especially in the new
trend of stylish design in apparel clothing. This has been obvious with the people living
in the rural area. A city lifestyle is required to be up to date in fashion trend, plus those
billboard advertising which can be seen all over the metro has a tremendous impact in
attracting customers.There are pro's and con when it comes to be always inline in terms of
wearing signature clothes.
A typical working person living in the city need a decent clothes to wear everyday. This is
the standard norms especially to the people in the corporate world. In addition to that,
a hardworking person with presentable attire is very pleasing in the eyes of the boss. Thus,
being in line with trendy clothes show how we represent ourselves with other people.
On the other hand, marketing companies using known personalities to endorse their product is quite
effective in their strategy. This is can be seen with most of the people buying and wearing their
stuff even if the cost is very pricey. Furthermore, people tend to max out their credit
card just to buy the things they saw from the advertisement. Hence, this will lead them being
drown to debt because of uncontrolled spending.
In accommodating the current trend in the fashion industry it is a temptation that hard to resist.
However, this might create a great havoc in a person financial life, not knowing how to control
our spending habit. It is expected that fashion industry will continue to grow but let's keep in mind
that there are more important things to spend our money rather than buying signature clothes.
NB: Your constructive criticism will be of much help for me to make a better essay in my coming exam.