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COMPUTER TRAINING COURSE

Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2014 2:13 am
by Aditi
Please review my writing and let me know my errors as well as band.

Your employer have arranged a computer training course for you next month, but you cannot go for personal reasons.

Write a letter to your employer.

Tell how this course would be useful to you
Why cannot attend
Suggest some other time

Dear Mr. Thomson,

I am writing in regards to computer training course which you have organised for me on the next month. Unfortunately, I would be unable to attend that course due to some personal issues.

Actually, this course is very important for my career because this will give me an opportunity to explore myself in the world of IT. As you know, my knowledge about operating system, Microsoft application and typing are in minimum stage, so, it will help me to overcome this issue.

However, Unfortunately, I would be unable to attend this course for this time because my dad had a bike accident last week. In that accident he was miserably injured and doctor had recommended to take complete bed rest for him. Since, I am the only child of my parents it is my duty to care him during his difficulties.

I would appreciate if you could transfer this course for the next session that is after 28th of august so that I get enough time to be mentally prepared. It would also allow me to spend some time with my dad.

Thanking you in advance for your consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Aditi Khatiwada

Re: COMPUTER TRAINING COURSE

Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2014 1:49 am
by Flick
Aditi wrote: Your employer have arranged a computer training course for you next month, but you cannot go for personal reasons.

Write a letter to your employer.

Tell how this course would be useful to you
Why cannot attend
Suggest some other time

Dear Mr. Thomson,

I am writing in regards to the computer training course which you have organised for me next month. Unfortunately, I am unable to attend that course due to some personal issues.

Actually, this course is very important for my career because this will give me an opportunity to explore myself in the world of IT. As you know, my knowledge about operating systems, Microsoft applications and typing is fairly low, so it will help me to overcome this issue.

However, unfortunately I am unable to attend this course at this time because my dad had a bike accident last week. In that accident he was miserably injured and doctor had recommended to take complete bed rest for him. (<-- Reword to: He was quite badly injured and the doctor has recommended complete bed rest for the next few weeks.) Since I am the only child of my parents, it is my duty to care him during his difficulties.

I would appreciate if you could transfer this course for the next session that is after 28th of August so that I have enough time to be mentally prepared. It would also allow me to spend some time with my dad.

Thanking you in advance for your consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Binu Sanjel