Please help me assessing my writing task 1 for GT
Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 5:23 am
You just had a holiday with your friend. Write a letter to tell him/her what you are doing now and invite him/her to visit you.
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Hi Stefan
I was back in New Jersey last night with some fresh memories of my stay at Toronto. Really glad and thankful for your hospitality and comfort during the trip. It was a nice little break away from work and has helped me immensely to rekindle my energies.
My return flight was on time and my tiredness certainly helped me with a good night sleep. I woke up little bit earlier and first thing I am doing is writing this email. My wife and kids are absolutely pleased with your gifts. Weather here is almost similar to Toronto and I am planning to go for a jog immediately after this. Anticipating some great fun meeting my running buddies after a week.
It would be an absolute delight for me and my family if you plan something similar for New Jersey in coming winters. It will be better if you can arrange proper vacations this year rather than trying to juggle with work. Let’s spend some good time at leisure and I hope you would be able to bring your family along.
Cheers,
Kevin
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Hi Stefan
I was back in New Jersey last night with some fresh memories of my stay at Toronto. Really glad and thankful for your hospitality and comfort during the trip. It was a nice little break away from work and has helped me immensely to rekindle my energies.
My return flight was on time and my tiredness certainly helped me with a good night sleep. I woke up little bit earlier and first thing I am doing is writing this email. My wife and kids are absolutely pleased with your gifts. Weather here is almost similar to Toronto and I am planning to go for a jog immediately after this. Anticipating some great fun meeting my running buddies after a week.
It would be an absolute delight for me and my family if you plan something similar for New Jersey in coming winters. It will be better if you can arrange proper vacations this year rather than trying to juggle with work. Let’s spend some good time at leisure and I hope you would be able to bring your family along.
Cheers,
Kevin