Please review my Ielts General Training Task-I

[Ali Ehsan]

You want to sell your television . You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend . In your letter explain
1- why are you selling the television.
2- Describe the television.
3- suggest a date when your friend come and see it.

Dear Ahmed,

Hope you are fine and doing well. I am good here too despite of being quite busy. As you know, I got admission in Florida University, USA, for Masters in business administration and I am leaving for USA in three weeks time. Before leaving, I need to sell my household items including television.

I have heard that you are looking for a 40 inch wide, flat screen television for your house. I would like to draw your attention to the one, which will definitely meet your specifications. It is the latest version of SAMSUNG available in the market at present. It has an excellent picture and sound quality, which the SAMSUNG is renowned for. Moreover, it is only 2 months old and is currently under warranty.

You can visit my place on coming sunday at any time to have a look on it. We will have negotiations on the price at that time. Please do call me on my number before leaving.

Hope to see you soon.

Your friend,
Ali

[Flick]

You want to sell your television . You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain
1- why are you selling the television.
2- Describe the television.
3- suggest a date when your friend come and see it.

Dear Ahmed,

I hope you are fine and doing well. I am good here despite being quite busy. As you know, I was accepted to Florida University, USA, for a Masters in Business Administration and I am leaving for the USA in three weeks time. Before leaving, I need to sell my household items including my television.

I have heard that you are looking for a 40 inch flat screen television for your house. I would like to draw your attention to mine, which will definitely meet your specifications. It is the newest SAMSUNG TV. It has excellent picture and sound quality, which SAMSUNG is renowned for. Moreover, it is only 2 months old and is currently under warranty.

You can visit my place this Sunday at any time to have a look on it. We can discuss the price then. Please call me before coming over.

Hope to see you soon.

Your friend,
Ali

[Ali Ehsan]

Dear Flick,

Thank you for your valuable inputs.

BR,
Ali