Please review my letter and give me feedback

[Ali Ehsan]

Task
An English speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- Offer to find a place for him to live.
- Give advice how to find a part-time job.
- Give information on where he can learn your language.

Dear Hassan,

I am really happy to know that you are coming in my town for study next year. I would definitely feel pleasure in assisting you.

There is no need to worry about the accommodation. I believe you can easily find student hostels near your university at cheap rates. You can also stay at my home as well, till the time you find a suitable place to live.

I know you would like to be financially independent. There are lots of part-time jobs available for everyone in my town, but I would suggest you to do the job in your own university. However, it could only be possible if you get good grades in the university. Hence, you need to put an extra effort right from the start.

One problem, you could probably face here is the language. Most people here do not know English; so you need to learn Urdu, which is the common speaking language here. Fortunately, there are many language learning centers here, especially for native English speakers. Hence, you will not find it hard to learn the new language.

I am eagerly waiting to see you and look forward to have a nice time together. Pass my regards to your family members.

Your friend,
Ali

[saqibali]

Ali, you are using prepared sentence .